thoughts on part 1? - 21
the rain was apprehensive,
as she trembled on the grass,
pitter-pattering through puddles
with her nervous little laugh,
she danced along the broken drain-gutters
carrying with her bits of glass,
it was strange to see her quite so tentative,
after her behavior in recent past.
constructive criticism always appreciated.
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